Comments for A spoiler-free tale of surviving the “Alone” personal horror experience at Busch Gardens Howl-O-Scream


  1. Roddy Barros (MKCustodial)

    Oh, Ricky, I’d give a severed finger to read spoilers about all this. I know it’d be a LOT of work, but still… Like I told you before, it’s not as if us Internationals will make it for Halloween. 🙂

  2. James

    We want spoilers! Please?

  3. James VanDerWall

    Alone sounds very cool. I am likely to participate in 2011.

    This article is very poorly written. The first person style is terrible, and it is way too verbose. This article needs fewer adjectives and more facts. You should be very clear and concise when writing to inform. You are attempting to describe the event not your feelings. The event might be scary, but it doesn’t matter if you are scared. You likely want to follow a very simple outline with three sentence paragraphs and simple (subject, verb period) sentences. You want to explain what is happing, the effect it has and why it has that effect. For example:

    “Alone takes place in a forest. The setting is scary and has an ominous feel. The woods of the forst are dark, quiet, and cold.”

    1. Ricky Brigante

      This article was written exactly as I wanted it to be: adjective-filed and with very few facts. Alone was an experience that needn’t be spoiled. I didn’t want to ruin it for anyone.

      With that said, after the event concluded, I did post a fact-filled, spoiler-filled recount of the Alone experience. I think that’s what you’re looking for:

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